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Collaborative Story Writing RP - Recruitment

It’s soooo lovely and fantastic story writing that touched my mind so far.

Thanks @Curika and all of our saviors for supporting and loving Tree

of Savior. :slight_smile:

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OMG! A staff noticed! :heart_eyes:

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I’ld rather draw this. But I can’t decide on a scanner to buy. I have the money saved up but I can’t choose between a flatbed or a portable “stick” scanner.

Flatbed for consistency unless you don’t have any desk space, usually higher dpi for the $

I really think having drawings to go along with the story would be amazing, even better if you make it some sort of graphic novel but that’s a lot of drawing.

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I’m a little confused with the time line though, is this pre catastrophe?

Yeah it’s pre- catastrophe, but it’s hinting to and leading to the catastrophe. I’ll try to get a post in on Sunday when I’m off work for a few days :o

@AnitaCafe I hope you enjoyed the read :smiley: and i hope i get to read your writing someday. Hopefully the bunny boy costume will tempt you back here for a bit xD

@STAFF_Max Thank you so much for the support :smiley: you too @STAFF_Amy I hope you guys enjoy the story as well

@c2gaming rebirthofleo answered perfectly, would you like to join the list of writers? All are welcomed :smiley: Of course if you just want to draw that would be perfectly amazing as well :smiley:

@kyokahn i agree :smiley: more art for the story would be awesome. This weekend i hope to add my own art for Thomas and Claire n_n

Btw guys if any one whos introduced an oc can provide a ref picture i would love to provide fanart for all of our amazing characters n_n if you are too shy to draw or can not draw at all, you can provide me with a description and i will do my best to work off of that :smiley: You could also use this free lineart by pinkieKAT123612 on deviant art.

There is also a lot more free line art if you look it up :smiley: if you want something made with free line art to be displayed in the fan art section please be sure to give me the link to the original artist so i can credit them n_n

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First of all, OMG A STAFF NOTICED US :open_mouth:

Second… I love the new OCs! Seriously lol

@Curika Can’t wait to see those two made by you lol. I always thought a character illustration is better, so we might avoid describing it in words. Well, my personal opinion xD I’ll add a new character later and also a new illustration of it (sooner or later)

I love how the story is going, but I also love that you guys got a brilliant imagination and beautiful way to put it in words.

Right now I just wanna draw. I got me a new toy to play with and it is working great (better than scanning with phone).

Here is a sample of my own story. I stopped because scanning with the phone just produced really bad images.

With 2 weeks worth of “meh” patches I’ve had time to do my research (who what when where how why) and flesh out character designs.

So I’m trying out paint.net to add in the speech bubbles. This here will be a sample page. Tell me what you think. Is the text too small (unreadable)?

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Little hard to read but the art is sweet!

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Yeah, pretty bummed about that. Didn’t expect it to be so small ~_~

!@#$ I have to come up with shorter dialogue so it doesn’t cover EVERYTHING.

The thread is aliiiiive again!

Ok, I had to really shorten the dialogue. That means I’ll need another page to “complete” the dream sequence. This should be readable this time (this is font size 36 O_o).

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Next page. This actually had me a little choked up while I made it. Plus it didn’t help that I was listening to the 1st 40 sec of this.

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@c2gaming I love your artwork! The scenes are almost identical to how I imagined it in my mind lol. Also the details are very fine, plus the coloring is magnificent.

Please allow me to praise your artwork once more, saying that it is wonderful and special to me.

@Curika shall add your drawings to the second post of the thread pretty soon too.

Yeah… I have this really “nice” (twisted? funny?) ending to “that day” though. :smiling_imp: Evil laugh :smiling_imp:

I’ll finish the 1st entry before that though.

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Ok, I hit a wall here. After hours of failed panels, hours of going through the net for a nice “sleeping messy hair look” for reference. I can’t come up with the bottom panel.

On the 1 hand I could go full blown sob story “Waaaaaaaaaaaaa mommy”, while on the other hand I could go with “I can’t remember my dream”. Then there’s the wildcard with waking up and just saying some random word “Pineapples …”

Wat du?

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turns around slowly, laying on her back while opening her saddened eyes, her mind hasn’t gone through her dream just yet, but she feels it already

In this panel she either explores her feelings about the dream if she doesn’t remember, or reasons about what she saw in there, if she does remember. That’s up to you.

Bonus points if you get a good 3/4 or lateral view that shows she’s staring at the ceiling, an almost blank, but mostly sad stare away from the POV. Teary eyes if required for impact, and a blurry background of the place she’s in because the scene is focused on her thoughts, but needs to reflect how disconnected those are from the place she’s currently in.

That’s how I see it at least :stuck_out_tongue: Love the top panel and it reminds me of someone, somehow.