List of Text Problems/Minor Issues

Excarion · August 6, 2015, 5:56pm

Bug Description :
Not sure if I am allowed to nitpick like this or if these are problems I should not concern myself with, but these do stand out a little… Sorry if this is not something I should be doing/looking for. These problems are located in the first area.

First image has a space after “shelter” and the period
Second image has weird breakpoints and an unnecessary comma and space between “travel” and “will surely”. This might need to be reworded too.
Third image just seems to have an extra space between “pure” and “destruction”

Steps to reproduce the issue :

First image is during the Start of Trouble quest from
Second image is from Klaipeda Officer -> About Goddess Statue
Third image is from Hoplite Master

Screenshots / Video :

Excarion · August 5, 2015, 5:37am

More minor text problems in Klaipeda.

[Accessory Merchant] Ronesa -> Ronesia Klaipeda’s Bracelet Description

Typo for { eveovoled }, should be “evolved”.

[Equipment Merchant] Dunkel -> Weapons -> Dunkel Bastard Sword

No spacing between { two-hand sword.’ } and { They }.

Help List -> Equipment Repair

Says { Repain } instead of “Repair” in a few places.

[Market Manager] Rosie

May be intended, but it seems to truncate off the description of the item at some point/only first line? Not sure if it is actually a problem, just giving it attention.

Worried Wife -> Regarding the five Goddesses -> About Goddess Vakarine

There is a { She } that is capitalized in the middle of the sentence. Not sure if this is intended for emphasis or not.

[Peltasta Master] Maria Leed

Says { Paltasta } instead of “Peltasta”.

Indifferent Widow

Incorrect translation/grammar.
Weird line break in 2nd image and sudden continuation for 3rd image.

Sorry once again if I am doing something wrong here.

Excarion · August 6, 2015, 6:46pm

Continuing… I’ll just edit any others into this one.

[Archer Master] Edmundas Tiller

Image 1: { arrow as a present } should be more like “an arrow as a present” or “arrows as presents” so it does not sound like slightly broken English.
Image 2: Not sure what he means by { actual shots }. I think it should be more like “the shots that actually hit are the ones that count” or something.

[Ranger Master] Nemoken

Image 1: Typo { Klaipda } should be “Klaipeda”, and “defeating them by once” should be “defeating them all at once”. Overall, that second sentence does not make much sense with the second clause.
Image 2: Just missing a period at the end.

Swordsman Attributes
-Period at the end of Weapon Swap description for consistency

-{ damages } should probably just be “damage” for several attribute descriptions
-Thrust: Continuous Attack - Typo { repeatitive } should be “repetitive” or “repeated”
-Thrust: Bleed - { Enemies with [Stun] falls under [Bleed] } should be “Enemies with [Stun] are inflicted with [Bleed]”

-Bash: Splash - Not sure if { Atk Ratio } is the official/proper contraction for this. This is the only place I’ve seen that so far.
-Gung Ho: Enhance - { defense decreases increases +1 } should just be { defense decreases by 1 }, and in that case maybe change the whole description to be more consistent
-Restraing: Slow - { will be in Slow after Stun gets removed } should be “will be Slowed after the Stun is removed”, also capitalize the first stun for consistency of status words