I’m not sure if you guys already went over any of the stuff for party quests, or even what level those are supposed to be, but that’s what this “Disappearances” quest is. Anyway:
“These are the eyes of the spirits that were created by requesting to Bokor Master.”
This sentence sounds pretty awkward right now and could probably use a complete rewording.
“These are the eyes of the spirits which the Bokor Master created at our request.” or something like that would probably be better?